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"See Me As I Am" by *Liz-the-echidna:iconLiz-the-echidna:

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Refer to me as one...
Who knows all about love,
And I'll refer to you as...
An angel from above,
We keep going away from it all so much,
I just wish we could stay as we are...so
Look into my eyes...
And see me as I am...

You know me as one...
Who loves you everyday,
And I know you as...
The angel that carries me away,
The next time we crosspaths,
We'll stay the way we are...

You see me as I am...
There's no one else like us,
You see me as I am...
I'm the one you can trust,
We look in each others eyes...
And we see us as we are...
©2008-2009 *Liz-the-echidna
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some random poem. it's late at night at my grandparents' house and just haven't written a poem in a while. ^^
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=julietcaesar:iconjulietcaesar: May 10, 2008, 10:36:45 PM
Just a spacing error in second stanza, 'crosspaths' should be 'cross paths'. Otherwise, good!

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~poems-iz-love73:iconpoems-iz-love73: May 10, 2008, 10:52:55 PM
really good! You do great poetry!! This is truly awesome. It deserves to be faved :hug:

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*Liz-the-echidna:iconLiz-the-echidna: May 11, 2008, 4:13:43 AM
^^ thanx a lot! :hug:

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*Liz-the-echidna:iconLiz-the-echidna: May 11, 2008, 4:14:32 AM
aah! typo! XD oh well, thanx anyway! ^^

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~Masterblaze0:iconMasterblaze0: May 11, 2008, 8:05:04 AM
Definatly better than my poetry...

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"We live on a placid island of ignorance in the midst of black seas of infinity, and it was not meant that we should voyage far."- "Call of Cthulhu"- H.P. Lovecraft

"I am something less then human.. but still something more."- Alex Mercer
*Liz-the-echidna:iconLiz-the-echidna: May 11, 2008, 8:14:35 AM
^^; well, do u have any poetry in ur gallery?

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~Masterblaze0:iconMasterblaze0: May 11, 2008, 8:18:11 AM
A lot. Check them out.

I made most of them during a funk though.

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"We live on a placid island of ignorance in the midst of black seas of infinity, and it was not meant that we should voyage far."- "Call of Cthulhu"- H.P. Lovecraft

"I am something less then human.. but still something more."- Alex Mercer
~poems-iz-love73:iconpoems-iz-love73: May 11, 2008, 8:32:38 AM
ur welcome! :glomp:

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*Liz-the-echidna:iconLiz-the-echidna: May 11, 2008, 8:44:41 AM
ok ^^

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